Second Draft of USA Today Ad

[Libertarian]

Amazing work...It's perfect.

 

[ronpaulhawaii]

Fantastic. The original was good, the changes are better. Thanks to all who are helping this effort. And my hat is off to llepard for the outlay of a fortune. I trust that everyone will tell everyone to buy USA Today on these days and we set another record...

m - who is glad to be out of the desert - only 67 mile to go today - lol - and towns all along the path - TG

 

[LibertyEagle]

We're nitpicking you now, llepard. It's great!

Thank you so much for doing this and for being so willing to consider the comments we made.

 

[mmarcman22]

Wonderful Ad!

There is an error though! On the bottom right side under the second checkmark, you need a space between "or special"

 

[ShowMeLiberty]

Perfect! Wow - it is just... perfect!

 

[bolidew]

The line
"Ron Paul supporters donated over $8 million in the first 40 days of the 4th quarter"
is redundant (and inaccurate).
One-day record already emphasize his fundraising attractiveness.

Instead, it would be better to just remove that line and use bigger fonts for "Ron Paul for President".

 

[VRP08]

It is perfect!!! I love it! Again, THANK YOU!

 

[troyd1]

I don't know if this has been mentioned, but the add itself should get play in the media and will be shown over and over. Huge exposure!

 

[LibertyEagle]

Oh, here's a big one. At least to me. PLEASE do not reference Ron Paul Forums on this ad.

Do we want people coming here who don't know squat about Ron Paul? You know as well as I do, that this is not the place for people just trying to find out more about his stances.

PLEASE do not do this.

 

[Ozwest]

In "We The People" above rons picture... the word "The" looks lifted out of place. Could you raise that entire line so that it would be level?

Might be personal preferance torchbearer, but I like the way the word "The" contours above his head, especially as it is centered to the page.

 

[dante]

Personally I don't think its wise to have the Ronpaulstopdreaming.com url on the ad. Everytime I read that I think its a hit piece on ron paul. AND actually i'm not sure for that matter that these forums or daily paul are the best place for someone to go to first.

Why don't we just give them the Ron Paul website and his toll free phone number that way they can call the campaign headquarters after reading this ad while driving around in their car to thanksgiving
1-877-Ron Paul

 

[RPinSEAZ]

Can anyone mirror this off of imageshack? Imageshack is blocked from work.

 

[dante]

Huge Error

The Toll Free Phone Number is 1-877-Ron Paul
it is NOT 1-877Ron2008

 

[georgem]

bryan or Llepard,

do we need to get permission to use this ad?

I'd like to print out a few hundred and leave a stack of them at the front counter of my business.

I assume its not copyrighted and that the designer would like his or her work spread even further, however, I just wanted to ask?

 

[RPinSEAZ]

Why don't we just give them the Ron Paul website and his toll free phone number that way they can call the campaign headquarters after reading this ad while driving around in their car to thanksgiving
1-877-Ron Paul

QFT

 

[kylejack]

Personally I don't think its wise to have the Ronpaulstopdreaming.com url on the ad. Everytime I read that I think its a hit piece on ron paul. AND actually i'm not sure for that matter that these forums or daily paul are the best place for someone to go to first.

Why don't we just give them the Ron Paul website and his toll free phone number that way they can call the campaign headquarters after reading this ad while driving around in their car to thanksgiving
1-877-Ron Paul

Replace with ronpaulishope.com?

 

[manny]

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful! The only thing I feel like changing is the post I made in the "running-mate" thread - forget Sarah Palin - I say Llepard for VP!

On a serious note - I really think these mods made are just about perfect. You have managed to remove all the little things that could confuse or scare people but the message is there 100%. I think the fact that there's lots of text and detail is important too. It should make those curious read it like an article. It also shows how enthusiastic his supporters are. A big problem we face is that every candidate says some nice things - but we all know from the record that RP is honest and will actually do them. And I get the feeling this enthusiasm shines through in this ad.

Llepard it has been said so many times but thank you so much.

(Another thing - will this ad then be able to be used by others in eg local newspapers or other national ones with a chip-in? Just wondering with all the complicated rules. But some local papers are fairly cheap to get a page and this could perhaps be used elsewhere??)

 

[MsDoodahs]

Nevermind, would throw the whole thing off.

THANK YOU LLEPARD!

 

[richardh]

llepard, thanks for what you're doing for all of us.

The only thing I didn't love about the first ad was the "We The Founders" references. IMHO, this one is perfect.

 

[Mark Rushmore]

Can anyone mirror this off of imageshack? Imageshack is blocked from work.

Check PM.