Weston White
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Regarding the recent Pledge of Allegiance thread, I thought it would be an interesting exercise to see if we could conceive a new non-socialistic variation of the pledge that would be more appealing. The current version is included below along with my own revisions:
Original: “I Pledge Allegiance to the flag of the United States of America and to the Republic for which it stands, one Nation under God, indivisible, with liberty and justice for all.”
Revision #1: I pledge allegiance to the unalienable fundaments of the United States of America and to the Republic upon which we stand, one Nation under virtuous Divinity, with liberty and justice for all humankind.
Revision #2: I pledge allegiance to the unalienable fundaments of the United States of America and to the Republic upon which we stand, one Nation under Divinity and virtue, with liberty and justice for all humankind.
Revision #3: I pledge allegiance to the original intent of the United States of America and to the Republic upon which we stand, one Nation under Divinity and virtue, with liberty and justice for all humankind.
Revision #4: I pledge allegiance to the Constitution of the United States of America and to the Republic upon which it stands, one Nation under Divinity and virtue, with liberty and justice for all humankind.
Revision #5: I pledge allegiance to the unalienable principles of the United States of America and to the strict Republic upon which we veraciously stand, one Nation under virtuous Divinity, with indissoluble liberty and justice in equality for all humankind.
Original: “I Pledge Allegiance to the flag of the United States of America and to the Republic for which it stands, one Nation under God, indivisible, with liberty and justice for all.”
Revision #1: I pledge allegiance to the unalienable fundaments of the United States of America and to the Republic upon which we stand, one Nation under virtuous Divinity, with liberty and justice for all humankind.
Revision #2: I pledge allegiance to the unalienable fundaments of the United States of America and to the Republic upon which we stand, one Nation under Divinity and virtue, with liberty and justice for all humankind.
Revision #3: I pledge allegiance to the original intent of the United States of America and to the Republic upon which we stand, one Nation under Divinity and virtue, with liberty and justice for all humankind.
Revision #4: I pledge allegiance to the Constitution of the United States of America and to the Republic upon which it stands, one Nation under Divinity and virtue, with liberty and justice for all humankind.
Revision #5: I pledge allegiance to the unalienable principles of the United States of America and to the strict Republic upon which we veraciously stand, one Nation under virtuous Divinity, with indissoluble liberty and justice in equality for all humankind.
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