URGENT * DEADLINE 7/28 MIDNIGHT* Grassroots Talent Needed for FULL PAGE Iowa ad

[V3n]

Esoteric - love the new one even more!

 

[sailingaway]

Esoteric - on your statement 'We will let it be known -- We....' if it is a dash, the second 'We' should not be capitalized. If you use a colon instead of a dash -- 'We will let it be known: We....' then it is fine to capitalize.

 

[sunny]

OK, I thought I took out the comment threads.....

There were a few new ones it seemed.

 

[Esoteric]

Esoteric - on your statement 'We will let it be known -- We....' if it is a dash, the second 'We' should not be capitalized. If you use a colon instead of a dash -- 'We will let it be known: We....' then it is fine to capitalize.

noted. input on the prose is welcomed - i winged it a bit.

 

[Romulus]

I'm aware of all my goofy typos - thanks for the corrections! I'm not good at the copy writing thing... If someone wants to rewrite it I'm open to that.

 

[Romulus]

updated:

 

[Romulus]

Sorry folks, I spoke to owner of this image and she says using it is a 'conflict on interest' for a straw poll ad. So it's Gage to the rescue... we'll have to use one of his images (with his permission)

 

[Eric21ND]

Can we buy the rights to the photo?

 

[Shane Harris]

Sorry folks, I spoke to owner of this image and she says using it is a 'conflict on interest' for a straw poll ad. So it's Gage to the rescue... we'll have to use one of his images (with his permission)

damn. that was my favorite one

 

[Romulus]

Can we buy the rights to the photo?

No... conflict of interest she claims still.... bummer

 

[jds8288]

Side by side comparison of all submissions so far. Assuming the 'close up' can be used We should pick based on what design Stands Out the best not content. Content can be changed.

 

[bamafanmco]

Love the constitution wording backing Paul's face

I keep reading we don't have rights to pic's in 1, 7, & 11, which are the best at first glance. Given that I like number 8. It is a little to plain but very clean.

I don't like the Washington Machine label, I never like it, it sounds too political. I hate in in the campaign TV add. Everyone knows Washington is a machine, but you have to figure out Paul's not part of it on your own. Simply stating it in an add or in person, draws disbelief and almost resentment. As in "Your arrogent enough to belief or state that this is the first and only honest politician in American history". I may be overstating it slightly.

 

[Romulus]

You forgot to include my 'Good Doctor' in that montage up there....

Gage will probably give us rights..

 

[jds8288]

You're right, I figured I'd forget at least 1. Sorry bout that. That's a pretty good one too. 1 sec.

Edit: it's in the collage now if you refresh your page (might have to hold down the Shift key while refreshing)

 

[speciallyblend]

You're right, I figured I'd forget at least 1. Sorry bout that. That's a pretty good one too. 1 sec.

hey make a new thread on this please with that as main op ok sometimes it is ok to have multiple ron threads in rpf

maybe add a poll with pics so each is a number? include all of the above in case a billionaire wants to run them all

 

[bamafanmco]

OK if we have the rights to the pic number 11, like the dark background and the picture fades at the edges. Good contrast with soft edges.

 

[jds8288]

hey make a new thread on this please with that as main op ok

"Main op"? Some lingo I'm not familiar with yet, ha.

 

[sunny]

Side by side comparison of all submissions so far. Assuming the 'close up' can be used We should pick based on what design Stands Out the best not content. Content can be changed.

Thanks a bunch JDS for doing that. It really helps to be able to get a glimpse of all the subs at a glance.

 

[sailingaway]

The one you have as second has several versions and I like the version where 'Conservative' is in the picture part, not just the substrata, and is in red. It is possibly my favorite of that theme justinpagewood did. I like Conservative being in red....

We could take out the poll part if it isn't wanted:

as a matter of text, I also like the phrase 'Real liberty, sound economics', for what it is worth. A bunch of those are great. I'd avoid pictures we don't have rights to, though.

 

[LibertyEagle]

Again, NO COMMIE RED STARS, please. It will not reflect on the good doctor well at all, with older conservatives.