URGENT * DEADLINE 7/28 MIDNIGHT* Grassroots Talent Needed for FULL PAGE Iowa ad

[sailingaway]

But the bigger ad in this case will get attention. In a newspaper, who looks at little ads?

 

[d1sCo]

Hey guys,

Throwing my idea into the mix. The design has Ron Paul formed from the constitution. I took some of the suggestions earlier in the forum that I liked and put a different spin on it. What do you guys think? Any and all suggestions/critiques are encouraged and welcomed. Thanks!

Link to the design here: http://i.imgur.com/hVx5f.jpg

- d1sCo

 

[Romulus]

What do you all think of this?

 

[Razmear]

Hey guys,

Throwing my idea into the mix. The design has Ron Paul formed from the constitution. I took some of the suggestions earlier in the forum that I liked and put a different spin on it. What do you guys think? Any and all suggestions/critiques are encouraged and welcomed. Thanks!

Link to the design here: http://i.imgur.com/hVx5f.jpg


- d1sCo

I like that a lot!
One suggestion, a few pages back a better wording was used for "The Only Republican" bits that was less repetitive and sounded a bit better, might want to swap that in.
Also there will need to be space somewhere for the PAC legal text, maybe a half inch at the bottom should be set aside.
A bit of tweaking might be possible, but I really like it.
Gonna DL it, shrink it to forum size so it gets more views and add it to this post.

eb

 

[UtahApocalypse]

What do you all think of this?

can this:

The only Congressman who has never voted to raise taxes.
The only Republican who predicted the financial collapse.
The only Presidential candidate who served in the military.

The only Conservative who can beat Obama.

be incorporated no that?

 

[d1sCo]

I like that a lot!
One suggestion, a few pages back a better wording was used for "The Only Republican" bits that was less repetitive and sounded a bit better, might want to swap that in.
Also there will need to be space somewhere for the PAC legal text, maybe a half inch at the bottom should be set aside.
A bit of tweaking might be possible, but I really like it.
Gonna DL it, shrink it to forum size so it gets more views and add it to this post.

eb

Thanks man, I re-sized it and embedded it in my post as well. Glad that you like it! I see what you mean about the wording. I think I will swap that out and maybe play around with some of the elements. This is still rough of course, anything is subject and open to change.

- d1sCo

 

[Razmear]

What do you all think of this?

More awesome work!
Super nice for a glossy, but the medium will be newsprint, not sure how the white text will show against the black, and might have a 'rub off' effect leaving ink on the readers.
Great job.

 

[trey4sports]

What do you all think of this?

I like it

 

[trey4sports]

can this:

be incorporated no that?

I don't think those things really go with the theme of his ad.

 

[Jean]

Love it!!!

 

[Romulus]

I lifted the copy directly from his statement... I think its a good fit for Ames given the target audience. But maybe its too churchy? I dont know..

 

[Romulus]

More awesome work!
Super nice for a glossy, but the medium will be newsprint, not sure how the white text will show against the black, and might have a 'rub off' effect leaving ink on the readers.
Great job.

Good points.. the design could be tweaked to reproduce well for newsprint.. I think printing has come a long way in quality though..'should' be alright in terms of production.

 

[trey4sports]

I lifted the copy directly from his statement... I think its a good fit for Ames given the target audience. But maybe its too churchy? I dont know..

no no, i think it's right on the money in terms of Ron's faith. Well done

 

[Nate-ForLiberty]

What do you all think of this?

I'm not a fan of this one. I do like the "Ron Paul" over the check box, though.

 

[d1sCo]

I may have missed it somewhere along the last 20 pages, but where are we supposed to submit these designs once they are finalized? Should we take a vote here on the boards between the ones presented here and then send the one in, or send them all in to the Super PAC?

- d1sCo

 

[Razmear]

I think Sunny is in contact with the PAC on this one, I'm assuming they will either be looking at this thread or she will be sending pics to them, not really sure tho.

eb

 

[Nate-ForLiberty]

Hey guys,

Throwing my idea into the mix. The design has Ron Paul formed from the constitution. I took some of the suggestions earlier in the forum that I liked and put a different spin on it. What do you guys think? Any and all suggestions/critiques are encouraged and welcomed. Thanks!

Link to the design here: http://i.imgur.com/hVx5f.jpg

- d1sCo

I'm not feeling the color scheme all that much and the picture used of Ron is not a good one. I REALLY REALLY like "Honest. Faithful. True" right above Ron Paul's name. That is great! Also was good mentioning the straw poll.

 

[Nate-ForLiberty]

still the best so far..

can we add this text in there?

The only Congressman who has never voted to raise taxes.
The only Republican who predicted the financial collapse.
The only Presidential candidate who served in the military.

The only Conservative who can defeat Obama.​

 

[Razmear]

still the best so far..

can we add this text in there?

Do we have a link to the full sized source?
also might want to change beat to defeat?

 

[d1sCo]

Made a few quick changes to the text and color scheme. I am a bigger fan of the first color scheme, however I think I will play around with it some more as even the first one has room for improvement. I plan on making some more adjustments tomorrow to refine it, but for now I shall sleep, haha.

High res link: http://i.imgur.com/ffPeM.jpg

-d1sCo