FINAL WARNING $440000 Bill IS READY FOR DOWNLOAD~ CHIP-IN and PRINT/DISTRIBUTE

[Jobarra]

Was going to say something about the banner too, but it's not a huge distraction. However, there is one problem on page 2 that I see. Ron Paul's speech before congress is broken up. The "Ron Paul has:" section is where the third part of the speech should be. Right now it looks like the speech parts aren't connected at all Hoping it's easy to shift the text around. Still, very good work.

What is o/l?

Edit to add: Oh, and the excerpt from Dr. Paul's Issues page might need to include the introductory paragraph all in the colored block. Right now I read it as two seperate things when they are all together. Should be something like this:

Beginning of block
In this excerpt from Ron Paul's Issues page on Healthcare[6]....

End of block
....we can make our health care system the envy of the world again."

The "If you have watched the televised debates so far..." paragraphs shouldn't be part of the issues page block.

 

[mavtek]

Yes, dump the revolution banner, the revolution is already started we don't care if others join us in the revolution we care about votes. For whatever reason some milder folks feel the word Revolution is radical in nature.

Just Put Dr. Ron Paul Hope for America.

 

[rpfan2008]

Was going to say something about the banner too, but it's not a huge distraction. However, there is one problem on page 2 that I see. Ron Paul's speech before congress is broken up. The "Ron Paul has:" section is where the third part of the speech should be. Right now it looks like the speech parts aren't connected at all Hoping it's easy to shift the text around. Still, very good work.

What is o/l?

online

 

[jake]

Good point. Maybe use the Ron Paul President 2008 instead. Straight to the point.

I like this idea

RON PAUL FOR PRESIDENT 2008

 

[Soccrmastr]

wheres the chip in?

 

[electronicmaji]

pdf plz!

 

[Jobarra]

online

Ah okay

wheres the chip in?

I was just getting the text done for canvassers and emailing. rpfan2008 was nice enough to get the graphics editting done which makes it look tons more professional than my wordpad attempt looks Hoping if people want to do this they'll just spend their own money and time mailing neighbors, canvassing, or emailing to friends/family.

 

[gb13]

Looks good, but the REVOLUTION banner is just dumb. Don't you guys realize yet that the majority of voting America isn't made up of 18 year old anti-establishment kids?

I totally agree here. That banner is an eye-sore in this application. On a sign at a rally, yeah, it looks cool. On a flyer you're going to be handing out to middle-aged, and elderly people who have never heard of Ron Paul before, it is just not the way to go at all.

Also, the bottom-left section of page two has some font issues. The "bold CAPITALIZED" text doesn't look good.

 

[Rhys]

Still need the text...

this is going to take me hours upon hours of time I could be billing a client for.

[email protected]

 

[Mark]

Check out the excellent PDF of Ron on Taxes posted here. There are other good documents on that site, check 'em out.

I REALLY need to upload more PDFs.. there are a TON of good ones now.. I'll try and upload more soon

Other than those links, there are many PDFs ect here too: http://RonPaul.cc/LWL/

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Follow along with Real Time Stats and Graphs today here:---> RonPaul.cc

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[Jobarra]

Still need the text...

this is going to take me hours upon hours of time I could be billing a client for.

[email protected]

Text is Here Rhys. Or are you looking for something else? I tried to put this in a wordpad document, but unfortunately it doesn't come out as good as it does on the forums. Don't have any word processing software either :/.

 

[Basilieus]

Love the work put into it, but its to wordy. 90% of the people will throw it away. It looks sloppy at that. Not trying to be negative, just trying to be honest.

It needs to be clear and to the point, not wordy and sloppy with a bunch of text pasted in.

 

[Rhys]

Text is Here Rhys. Or are you looking for something else? I tried to put this in a wordpad document, but unfortunately it doesn't come out as good as it does on the forums. Don't have any word processing software either :/.

Awsome! I'll do my best to finish by tomorrow morning. It wont be the best thing ever since it is so rushed, no time to focus test (hehe I know, I know beyond anything we need) but it'll work.

 

[Jobarra]

Awsome! I'll do my best to finish by tomorrow morning. It wont be the best thing ever since it is so rushed, no time to focus test (hehe I know, I know beyond anything we need) but it'll work.

Trust me, it will look better than just a wall of text which is all I had come up with up to this point. Thank you for both you and rpfan2008's work on this matter.

 

[Rhys]

yeah, np.

rpfan2008's template is a great starting point. He/she's talented.

 

[Fields]

yeah, np.

rpfan2008's template is a great starting point. He/she's talented.

Post a new thread when you're done with it. I can't wait.

 

[literatim]

Too much on it. It should be simple and actually look like a bill.

 

[Fields]

Too much on it. It should be simple and actually look like a bill.

Rhys is editing it. Hopefully that's what he does to it. I have full faith it'll come out as such.

 

[bubbleboy]

I can upload a pdf if I knew how to upload files.

 

[abbgt1]

Debts and future obligations are over 40 Trillion. Amazing, but I'd say it in many fewer words.

"The more you write, the less they read."

"The more you say, the less they hear."

Keep it brief (great effort, just being honest!)