FINAL WARNING $440000 Bill IS READY FOR DOWNLOAD~ CHIP-IN and PRINT/DISTRIBUTE

[wowabunga]

The message looks GREAT... thanks for the time to do this.

The emotion of Ron Paul looks cold... not sure why maybe poor resolution. Please warm it up with a better dpi resloution, or maybe change image. My 2 cents... per a background in newspapers, magazine, and advertising agencies.

 

[TruckinMike]

Great job!

Keep following the 80% rule --- thats how you get things done, and perfect isn't always right.

(but whatever you do get rid of the underline on the Bold text and dump the revolution banner)

TMike

 

[wowabunga]

Looks good, but the REVOLUTION banner is just dumb. Don't you guys realize yet that the majority of voting America isn't made up of 18 year old anti-establishment kids?

Do we have a pic of Ron Paul and his family... lots of grand kids ?????? It's all about the giving... giving our next generation a better country.

 

[Vet_from_cali]

nice job

 

[the_oco]

I love it but have to agree abut dumping the revolution banner as well. Otherwise something I'd gladly print and distribute.

 

[Rhys]

God that's a lot of text. I'm still working on it. I'm not sure if most of that text is making the cut. I'm using legal sized layout. it looks cool so far I think. it plays on the idea of a bill a little more without making someone want to trash it instantly! lol

 

[ddoggphx]

Can someone please, please email me the final WITHOUT the revolution part.

These two threads are hard to follow....just too much crosstalk.

PM me the link or post it here.

I want to print out a ton of these and leave them in strategic locations in my community...which will NOT like the revolution banner.

Just a RonPaul2008 is enough...ain't broke...don't fix.

 

[ddoggphx]

BTW, something like this with a lot of text is PERFECT to leave in public restrooms, where people are looking for something to read while they...ahem..do their business.

Underrated marketing opportunities lie in the downtime of the crapper...I *$*% you not.

 

[misconstrued]

I like the design, but I thought this was going to look like an actual invoice/bill?

 

[rpfan2008]

page 2 modified

goto starter post to see

 

[crazyfacedjenkins]

hahah, I love these things with the warning of a $440k bill. Our meetup bought 60k door hangers that had that on it.

 

[bolidew]

This thing need to be made through.

 

[rpfan2008]

cool. If you can send the editable pdf (or .ai or whatever it is in) to [email protected]. That way I wont have to retype everything by hand.

oops I missed your comment, it was in PSD but finally I merged it

 

[rpfan2008]

Can someone please, please email me the final WITHOUT the revolution part.

These two threads are hard to follow....just too much crosstalk.

PM me the link or post it here.

I want to print out a ton of these and leave them in strategic locations in my community...which will NOT like the revolution banner.

Just a RonPaul2008 is enough...ain't broke...don't fix.

as you wish

Great job!

Keep following the 80% rule --- thats how you get things done, and perfect isn't always right.

(but whatever you do get rid of the underline on the Bold text and dump the revolution banner)

TMike

what is 80%rule?? educate me

 

[Rhys]

Oops, I meant to post this here:

Sorry, I had some shit to do. This is where I left off last night. I'm about to get back to work on it. What do you think? Obviously this is NOT finished, or even half way so. It's not even the whole front page!

I just thought you'd like to see I am getting something done.

 

[rpfan2008]

Oops, I meant to post this here:

Sorry, I had some shit to do. This is where I left off last night. I'm about to get back to work on it. What do you think? Obviously this is NOT finished, or even half way so. It's not even the whole front page!

I just thought you'd like to see I am getting something done.

Nice,

but I think its not good enough for handouts but as posters it will be great. It really draws attention.
Good , but don't repeat my mistake , keep those white spaces.

 

[Rhys]

Nice,

but I think its not good enough for handouts but as posters it will be great. It really draws attention.
Good , but don't repeat my mistake , keep those white spaces.

lol yeah, yours was slightly devoid of any white space.

i'm gonna give you the best tip I ever got as a brand new designer:

Plan your whitespace. Unplanned whitespace is just as bad as no white space.

 

[ShowMeLiberty]

Oops, I meant to post this here:

Sorry, I had some shit to do. This is where I left off last night. I'm about to get back to work on it. What do you think? Obviously this is NOT finished, or even half way so. It's not even the whole front page!

I just thought you'd like to see I am getting something done.

I think it's looking great! I'm really looking forward to the finished product because I LOVE this idea, but I knew nobody would read the version with so much text.

 

[rpfan2008]

lol yeah, yours was slightly devoid of any white space.

i'm gonna give you the best tip I ever got as a brand new designer:

Plan your whitespace. Unplanned whitespace is just as bad as no white space.

Photoshop/Corel..other?

 

[Rhys]

I've used Corel in the past. I like it.

Now days I use almost all Illustrator and Photoshop from Adobe.

Everything Adobe. Some people like Quark Express for layout, I like InDesign. lol

I'm using illustrator for this. It's my thing latly, bright open layouts... perfect for AI.