i like it but i think the intro part focuses much too strongly on the abortion view. i understand hes trying to reach conservatives but i don't think his ames speech was his best on the subject.
I agree
If he does the same in NH he needs to change the focus
Maybe in Iowa it will play better
In part #2 when he talks about never voting for raising taxes, never took junkets, etc
all that should be in the opening 30 seconds
You need to grab people's attention on things that gets everyone pissed off in the first 30 seconds
abortion splits the vote but again in Iowa it will play due to strong Evangenical - and SC as well would be ok with this presentation
but it needs to be spliced differently if it goes to NH ... or Florida, Michigan, etc