Isn't it violating some asinine law for Paul to accept an advertisement for free from a supporter? Campaign finance and all that?
That ad would be great for a national campaign, but I don't know about local stuff. Particularly in NH, people tend to dislike slick and glossy advertising for candidates.
I agree it probably needs some kind of voice-over, too. TV ads that have to be read work occasionally, but they're a rarity. You also might want a better pic of the Doc for the end, one of him smiling or something. His face is the sort that looks grumpy if he's not actively smiling, even if he's not really grumpy. Nobody wants a grumpy President.