With the exception of the last sentence (which i don't think u intend to include in your hypothesis) i would consider this a decent starting point for a research paper. It is written as a overview of the objectives of what you hope to prove. The thing is you MUST cite some sources in this case such as the grand canyon bit. Show me the math to support it.Again with the trees please cite a source for that. Also where is the testable data being presented. There is no way to confirm anything you said there in regards to the second paragraph. You make a good amount of claims on observation but do not show how you made those observations or where you got the idea from to begin with a simple statement of
"We see that it is so. This results in deformities and sub-optimal functioning and occasionally allows for adaptation, but always results in a detriment to the species to survive outside of the specific environment that the mutation helped it adapt to. Moreover, I would expect that these mutations always result in a net loss of meaningful information. We see that it is so. "
Please cite where you see that it is so.
"I would expect that our planet is special and that we are special among the animal kingdom because God has a purpose for our lives. I see we are special and that God states why in His book, the Holy Bible. I would also expect that the conditions be right for life, such as the right orbit around the sun at exactly the right distance to sustain life, and I see that it is so. Furthermore, I would expect life only to rise out of other life, which is clearly observable. No atheist has ever given a good explanation for this one."
This is a subjective idea that can be applied to any religion or belief system. IF you are to claim that "Your GOD" states in the holy bible that is so. Then you must then show why "Your GOD" is the one that does this and not the other gods of the world.
As for the orbit thing you do realize we are in anything but a perfect orbit? Also we could be almost as far out as mars and still be a habitable planet?
Here is a wonderful diagram done up at Penn state. Just remember the planets are enlarged so you can see them

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https://www.e-education.psu.edu/astro801/content/l12_p4.html