great job RevolutionPac team.
I'd recommend, though, on future ads, if possible, that you provide a link to the youtube video so that people can watch the thing in its entirety. I'm not sure if this ad could have been edited in a way that told the story as effectively as the longer version did, but there's not much that can be done about that. People who actually take the time to look up RevolutionPAC's videos on youtube are the types of research-doing voters who are likely to end up voting for Ron Paul, so like I said, if there's a way to ad a link in at the end that goes straight to the youtube ads, I'd put it in.
That's all I can think of. Great job.