RevPAC "Compassion" ad to air 3x during ABC-WMUR NH debate Saturday!

I love it. Thanks guys for doing this and funding it.

To all other folks maxed out--> this is what revolutionpac is doing. I think it is a worthy cause and I've funded previous efforts. This is money well spent.
 
Good cut, Nice work!

At 0:50, I hear some sort of abnormal sound, like overlapping voice-over. Please check it out.


:60 cut
"I never received a bill from the hospital or anything" [0:30]

Full
"And he said, as far as the bill, he would take care of anything. I never received a bill from the hospital or anything" [1:06 - 1:14]

If those extra 5 seconds or so could be included, I think it would be just even better. But again, excellent work!

edit: Ok, already looks like some people are talking about this part. Cool.
edit2: Dang... there just isn't anything to cut in this. Every second is perfect.
 
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Marketing 101.

3 different ads is too much information to expect to an audience to keep in their head. If people come away with just this single ad in their mind when thinking about Ron Paul, then that should match your best expectations.
 
Please no one re-post the unlisted Youtube vid below. For discussion in this thread only.

Revised version with suggested script change. Much better I think. (updated OP with this version).

OLD:
I never got a bill from the hospital or anything.

NEW:
And he said as far as the bill he would take care of everything, which he did.

 
Please no one re-post the unlisted Youtube vid below. For discussion in this thread only.

Revised version with suggested script change. Much better I think. (updated OP with this version).

OLD:
I never got a bill from the hospital or anything.

NEW:
And he said as far as the bill he would take care of everything, which he did.


Wow, very nicely done. That one change really helped.
 
Please no one re-post the unlisted Youtube vid below. For discussion in this thread only.

Revised version with suggested script change. Much better I think. (updated OP with this version).

OLD:
I never got a bill from the hospital or anything.

NEW:
And he said as far as the bill he would take care of everything, which he did.



YES!!! That one edit is just a tiny bit sloppy going into it, but I'm sure you intend to address it.
 
Wow is right! You guys Rock! That add is going to get us alot of extra votes. BIG PROPS!
 
The old version may air a bit tomorrow while this new one works its way into the system. But the new one will be the one during Sat's debate.
 
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