I watched the original and loved it, but I felt this version along with the shorter running time held my attention better. There are major improvements I wanted to suggest though. Let's discuss the current shorter version first. It starts off by immediately separating Ron Paul from the establishment Republican candidates. It shows the GOP candidates as being all the same, saying the same things, arguing about the same petty issues and their massive support for more war. It basically paints them as offering no real change whatsoever. Ron Paul on the other hand is shown to have a deep knowledge about the issues and how doing what the governement has been doing has gotten us the results that we're facing at this moment. It shows that he's a principled and truthful person that cares deeply for the country, the constitution and the liberty and freedom of everyone and that he stood up to those war mongers on national television and spoke about the things he believed in without backing down.
It then goes on to show that these debates ignited a major grassroots campaign in support of his presidency, showing all the supporters, how they each contributed in their own way through all the various projects that were taken on, especially the massive money bombs that took place, earning Paul millions of dollars. We also see though how the establishment was against a principled and truthful person like Ron Paul interfering with their election, how the establishment candidates made fun of him to his face and how the media discounted him as a serious contender for the presidency, ultimately ending with the nomination of John McCain and Ron Paul dropping out of the race.
What's spectacular though is that it doesn't end with Ron dropping out of the race. Instead, it shows Ron's supporters pushing on without him running for president. It goes on to show their protest of McCain's nomination, the Rally for the Republic and their dedication to freedom, liberty and the ideas that Dr. Paul has taught them over the course of his campaign. Instead of just fading away, Ron's supporters have only just started in this battle.
I think this is a good ending for a candidate who isn't going to run anymore. It shows the story of someone that sparked a revolution, but ultimately failed to conquer the establishment and the media that turned against him. To somebody not familiar with Ron Paul, watching this should help to convert them into a fan of Ron Paul, but it doesn't do anything to ingrain the belief that Ron Paul has a very good chance to win in 2012. The belief that he can win is one of the most important, if not the most important thing that we need to communicate to people. I know plenty of people that like him but wouldn't vote for him because they don't believe it will make a difference. This belief will allow people the freedom to act on their support of Ron Paul. If any of you guys here read my huge self-development thread on this forum a while back, in order to accomplish any goal, you need both "desire" for the goal and the "belief" that it can be accomplished. If either one is lacking, people will not act to accomplish that goal. It's as simple as that.
With the video in its current form, you ignite a very strong desire in people to see Ron Paul as president. What you need to work on now is the second half of the equation, figuring out how to develop that belief in people watching it that he can win. Here is my suggestion. Leave everything the way it is now, except for the edits you planned to incorporate to make it better. What you need to do is take the ending as it is right now at the Rally for the Republic and expand it. This might require you to cut some more unnecessary parts from the first part of the film in order to keep the running time the same. In expanding the ending, what needs to be added are the accomplishments of Ron Paul's grassroots movement since his campaign ended, the Audit the Fed bill gaining mainstream acceptance, the rise of the tea party triggered by Ron's campaign, his son Rand Paul's election to the senate, his massive acceptance and newfound exposure in the media as a ratings powerhouse, our back to back wins at CPAC and finally ending the film with Ron announcing his 2012 bid for the presidency, the viewer's new goal to look forward to. Hopefully you'll have your footage of Ron's announcement within the month.
This might seem like a lot to cover in the short amount of time allowed, but I think it can be done. We don't need to have a full focus on each of these events, maybe a minute to two minutes or even less on each event just glossing over what happened, but they need to be shown back to back, each event propelling Ron even further into the spotlight and the acceptance of the media. There's a lot of acceptance from the media to be shown, such as the hosts of some of these shows begging him to run again, like Dylan Ratigan's recent interview with Ron, or even acceptance from the general public, such as his rise in the polls or his hypothetical tie with Obama. All of this will help to create the perception or belief in the viewer that Ron has accomplished much since the campaign and really can win now. I'd like a comment from you guys on my suggestion if possible. I believe it's probably the most important thing you still need to convey within the film, the belief that he can win in 2012. Then we can mass produce this thing and get it out to potential voters!