amonasro
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My fellow journalist writer who helps me with these, says that the statement is most accurate. Obama's support is greatly dwindled when compared with Ron Paul. Paul pulls the most support from independents, liberals, and conservatives. While Romney only appeals to the conservatives alone.
My first instinct is that it should not be changed.
"Our only chance to beat Obama" sounds weaker than the original slogan, "The only Republican that can beat Obama" which is strong and firm.
This is marketing, remember. Citing polls is just going to muck it up. People will look at this for ten seconds and put it down. Best not to complicate things for them.
I will run it by my wife (she's a senior exec in marketing) and have her offer some suggestions, and see what she thinks about the advice already given.