LLepard Strikes Again!!! Final Advert.

From the United Kingdom, I would just like to extend my thanks. For Believing in Liberty enough to sacrifice your blood and sweat in its name. You are a true individual patriot!
 
tsetsefly said:
when will these appear...
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The New York Times will appear on one day between Dec. 24th through Dec. 29th , inclusive. Their choice.

I do not know what day. They have a choice. I am on the stand by rate. They get to pick the date. So we will just have to watch.


The New Hampshire ads will all appear on Friday, Dec. 28th, except a few which will appear on Sunday.
 
The article is great. It reads full of passion yet it is very concise. I love it.
I just have one little grammatical nit-pick.

"If it sounds like I am angry. That is right. "

The use of period doesn't seem correct. "If it sounds like I am angry" is not a complete sentence.
IMHO it would read better "If this sounds angry, it's because I am angry." or "If it sounds to you like I am angry, you are right."
But, the message is clear as written and no one will stop reading because the grammar might not be 100% correct.
 
Compulsive1 said:
The article is great. It reads full of passion yet it is very concise. I love it.
I just have one little grammatical nit-pick.

"If it sounds like I am angry. That is right. "

The use of period doesn't seem correct. "If it sounds like I am angry" is not a complete sentence.
IMHO it would read better "If this sounds angry, it's because I am angry." or "If it sounds to you like I am angry, you are right."
But, the message is clear as written and no one will stop reading because the grammar might not be 100% correct.
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We fixed this, and a few other nits. lead is now led.

at the top advertisment is now advertisement.

L
 
. . . You should donate to other grassroots projects, too . . .

Meh . . . I'm an ass. Awesome job and THANK YOU. :)
 
boondoggle said:
. . . You should donate to other grassroots projects, too . . .

Meh . . . I'm an ass. Awesome job and THANK YOU. :)
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I have. But not to all of them. There just is not enough time. I find myself very time constrained. I am receiving hundreds, ney thousands of emails. It is tough to be responsive to all of them. No insult intended to anyone if I do not respond, I have family stuff going on.

We all do what we can. I figure this is my highest and best use. Hope so.
 
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I Am Speechless

...and I have tears in my eyes, reading this NYTimes ad. Thank you so much Lawrence and thanks so much to all of you contributed your time, commitment, caring, and expertise to this project. May we wake up millions of Americans to the cause of liberty, prosperity, and peace with this ad. God bless us all!
 
Can someone talented at it, write a synopsis of the letter/ad please?

Something we can email, or even send "hard copy" to people, with a link to Larry's pdf attached?

Perhaps someone can even create a webpage to link to, with the letter presented in a well-formated, attractive, professional way.
 
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LLEPARD! WOW! I just finished reading the final version & there are tears in my eyes. THANK YOU SO MUCH for doing this. I genuinely believe this could very well become the next "Common Sense". I am going to send the PDF to everybody on my contact list & show it to anybody who will listen. "Amazing, Amazing" does not even do it justice. WOW and THANK YOU again!
 
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