donnay
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Liberty community, please critique this video I just made.
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That is good. It should be posted to the front page when finished.
Later today I will upload version 2 of the video. I've compacted it a bit, removed the beginning, and changed the ending. I've also added some Ron Paul in there (audio only). Once I've uploaded it I'd like some more honest critiques, and I will take the best from each video and make a final version.
I left the young turks in there, because I feel like it kind of drives that particular point home and without it, it just kind of fails to have as much of an impact. But a good argument for removing it could sway me.
I left the young turks in there, because I feel like it kind of drives that particular point home and without it, it just kind of fails to have as much of an impact. But a good argument for removing it could sway me.
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I just went ahead and finished it up. Final version.
What do you think?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQhL_eZu_fs
What do you think?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQhL_eZu_fs
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Pretty good work. Only confusion came when trying to read the text and listen to what was being said at some points. It was one or the other since the text was overlayed on the visual instead of fading into it. Either had to disregard the dialogue and read the text or read the text and disregard the dialogue. Maybe should have inserted the eagle flying during those parts where the text was instead of over top of the vocals. Other than that, it's a very good video. Very, very good work. Last half was excellent frequency. I think you can achieve complete frequency if you were to take my advice on the text and re-insert the eagle in flight while the text is displayed. The text took away concentration on some key parts. Especially during Ron's stuff.
People's opinions are a pain in the ass, huh? After all of that hard work. Bunch of nit pickers, we are.
What are you going to do with it? Try to rekindle some of that energy that Ron brewed up during that last ride?
People's opinions are a pain in the ass, huh? After all of that hard work. Bunch of nit pickers, we are.
What are you going to do with it? Try to rekindle some of that energy that Ron brewed up during that last ride?
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Did you delete the original? I was going to re-watch it to compare.
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