We MUST get this ad to the campaign. AWESOME.

[acstichter]

That's a beautiful artistic work but not a good ad. You can't make people read an ad. They need to be able to listen to it. And besides the words kept vchanging sides and angles and I got a crook in my neck trying to keep up with it all. This fails when it comes to a tv ad. Did I say it's beautiful though. Really awesome work.

 

[risiusj]

The only problem is the music.
I love the selection, but it would cost a ton to get the rights to the song.

 

[DrNoZone]

That's a beautiful artistic work but not a good ad. You can't make people read an ad. They need to be able to listen to it. And besides the words kept vchanging sides and angles and I got a crook in my neck trying to keep up with it all. This fails when it comes to a tv ad. Did I say it's beautiful though. Really awesome work.

Agreed completely! It looks pretty and has great music, but ads need to be more than pretty and rockin'.

 

[hard@work]

THIS IS EXACTLY THE TYPE OF ADD THAT WILL WIN A NATIONAL CAMPAIGN!!

 

[itsnobody]

The message is good but I personally don't like the annoying music

 

[max]

we get that ad aired nationwide....with some adjustments...and we win

any questions?


Someone needs to get to RP PERSONALLY with this

in the meantime...I'll keep bumping this every day

 

[Falseflagop]

f'IN awesome!!!!!!!!!!

gET THAT ad ON tv NOW!!!!!

 

[fletcher]

OMG That ad is awesome.

 

[DeadheadForPaul]

love the ad

 

[NinjaPirate]

Excellent ad!

 

[Richandler]

Superawesome. Perhaps since some people are maxed out we can put together our own fund raising drive to get it on air? Or maybe he could sell it to the campaign for $1!

 

[MozoVote]

thumbs up!

 

[ClayTrainor]

wow, what an ad... absolutely incredible production values.

 

[purplechoe]

This is the best add I've seen yet! We need to put this ourselves on the tv if we have to with chip-ins! Whomever made it, GOOD WORK!!!

 

[DrNoZone]

When the wow-factor wears off, you'll all realize why this is a TERRIBLE ad for gaining traction. It's pretty, but it's horribly ineffective for anyone who is NOT already an RP supporter.

 

[EvilEngineer]

Someone help find how to secure the rights for the song usage so we can air it on tv.

 

[starless]

1. Voice over

2. Horizontal text, not diagonal flashing from side to side

3. Longer time on screen for text

4. Maybe a cheaper song?

 

[Ron Paul Fan]

When the wow-factor wears off, you'll all realize why this is a TERRIBLE ad for gaining traction. It's pretty, but it's horribly ineffective for anyone who is NOT already an RP supporter.

Maybe, but it does grab your attention doesn't it?

 

[ClayTrainor]

When the wow-factor wears off, you'll all realize why this is a TERRIBLE ad for gaining traction. It's pretty, but it's horribly ineffective for anyone who is NOT already an RP supporter.

how do you come to that conclusion... i disagree.

care to elaborate?

 

[withallmyheart]

Very catchy and I love the tune.

It needs a voice over saying the words on the fan blades. If you walked out of the room you would not know who the ad was for or even what it is saying.

This critique applies to many of the ads I've seen. THe visual is there and very powerful but there is no verbal dialogue to go with it. You need to hear (not just the background music but the message) and see the ad.