I have some suggested changes, all in bold.
I added a closing section about his personal life.
I added an "ethics" section.
Rearranged the points. I think the ethics point will really catch the attention.
This is a great letter. Is it too long?
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- Mike Huckabee has been investigated by a government ethics commission 14 times. Five of those times resulted in an official reprimand. The issues include personal use of government funds, funneling money through a false “charity”, hiding donor information, and misreporting personal income. Ron Paul has put his faith into action with an extraordinary ethical record for over 30 years. He does not use taxpayer money for his travels, never voted for a congressional pay raise, and even returns some of his office budget to the US Treasury each year.
- Mike Huckabee supports government funding of church's ministerial work. As the federal government continues to provide more funding for churches, they surrender their Christian sovereignty to the State. The eventual result is manipulated official state churches similar to what we see in Communist China. Ron Paul would end this underhanded assault against the free Church by stopping such programs.
- Mike Huckabee wants to continue to allow the humanist influenced Dept of Education to have full control over our children's public education. Ron Paul would abolish the Dept of Education. In addition, Ron Paul believes parents should be rewarded substantial tax credits if they choose home or private schooling.
- Mike Huckabee only plans to play a never ending chess game of nominating judges that might challenge abortion on demand. Ron Paul has consistently introduced to Congress the Sanctity of Life Act which, if passed, would've ended abortion on demand as we know it. Furthermore, Huckabee will continue to allow federal courts to decide law on issues such as religious displays, prayer in schools, abortion and same-sex marriage. Paul's We the People Act of 2006 would forbid federal courts from reviewing these issues. Federal judicial tyranny against religious freedom would be crushed.
- Mike Huckabee believes marriage is an institution of the government. Ron Paul understands that marriage is a religious institution that transcends man's governments. Ron Paul would fight to bring it back to its roots as a religious institution.
- Mike Huckabee will continue to foolishly divide the land of Israel to its enemies. This angers God and if continued, our nation may cease to be blessed by Him. Ron Paul will stop this destructive liberal policy.
- Mike Huckabee supports continual US involvement in the UN. Ron Paul realizes that precursors to one world government are something Christians should vehemently oppose. As such, Ron Paul is the only candidate that would end our membership with the UN, CFR, and other global organizations.
- Mike Huckabee supports the Federal Reserve, the private bank responsible for the destruction of our dollar. Thanks to the Fed, our dollar is now worth around 4 cents. What was the one time Jesus got violent? When He was confronting the money changers for profiteering from the the people of God. Ron Paul is the only candidate who wants to confront the money changers as Jesus did. The Federal Reserve's days are numbered when Ron Paul steps into office.
Ron Paul bears a Christian testimony in his personal life, his political record, and his statement of faith. He has been married to his wife Carol for over 50 years. He is a former flight surgeon in the US Air Force, and a medical doctor (OB/GYN) that has delivered more than 4,000 babies. Ron Paul was one of Ronald Reagan's earliest supporters. Please consider voting for Dr. Paul at your Republican caucus on January 3, 2008. If you'd like to learn more, call Ron Paul's Iowa headquarters toll-free at 1-888-828-PAUL (7285) or visit his website, RonPaul2008.com.
