Seeing how many views this thread is getting, I think it would be a good idea to correct the errors in the OP. You could start with the first paragraph. "I" is always capitalized (and there are 4 more occurrences of this error in the post). You've misspelled "Pawlenty". Learn the difference between "then" and "than" and use the correct word. Parentheses go right before or after the words they enclose, rather than separated by a space.
In paragraph two: Sentences require subject and object. "Anyone who described their employer as military" isn't a complete sentence. Commas go right after the word they follow, not before the following word. "Breakdown" is one word, not two.
In "Paul does not beat total donations of all other candidates combined, however hes still comes in double the Republican's combined and #1 out of all candidates", the apostrophe is misplaced in "Republican's" and there's an extra "s" in the 13th word.