Ron Paul 30 Sec Spot2 - American Liberty Coalition PAC

[Dave Wood]

I like it but agree about the voices.

I think it would be clearer if the kids voices were heard by themselves and never used to talk over the adult voices, imho.

Good ad though, the constitution is really starting to come back to life in peoples minds and they are slowly realizing that we are in dangerous waters.

Gallup poll, taken 1.5 months ago, question :"do you think th U.S. constitution is still relevant today as a governing document" 97% yes

 

[sunny]

it was 230 years ago not 220

1787 not 1776

 

[AdamT]

it was 230 years ago not 220

1787 not 1776

I think you have you math wrong. The Constitution just celebrated it's 220th anniversary.

 

[BillyDkid]

I think it would be better with one voice, rather than a lot. It's kinda distracting with all those voices, but that's just me.

Esp. the first sentence, it doesn't form a sentence, so I think most viewers (and me) would be like "huh?" and get confused and stuff.

Yeah, the multiple voices thing doesn't work for me either. I understand the idea behind it, but it is distracting and confusing - it would be better if the intervals given to each voice were a little longer.

 

[Ninja Homer]

I like the multiple voices, but don't like it when they speak at the same time. It kind of muddles the message.

I like the background music, but it would be best to have music without vocals. The singing also muddles the message.

I like the kids in it. It doesn't matter if kids can't vote; it's to appeal to parents, not kids.

 

[ThePieSwindler]

i thought it was pretty damn good.

 

[AdamT]

Here's a new version.

I cleaned up the voices a bit more, taking out most of the overlap or "morphing". I toned down the kid's voices a little and altered the pacing slightly.

Does it work better now? Please comment.

 

[KewlRonduderules]

Great video! I'd use only kid's voice only once and briefly. multiple voices don't work for me either.

 

[rajibo]

Here's a new version.

I cleaned up the voices a bit more, taking out most of the overlap or "morphing". I toned down the kid's voices a little and altered the pacing slightly.

Does it work better now? Please comment.

Much better!

 

[Ninja Homer]

Here's a new version.

I cleaned up the voices a bit more, taking out most of the overlap or "morphing". I toned down the kid's voices a little and altered the pacing slightly.

Does it work better now? Please comment.

Yes, much better. I think it works great!

 

[born2drv]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dvzUiOtaFr0

thoughts?

I loved the whole thing. But I agree with the words being kind of jumbled. They don't flow very well, like when you transition from one voice to another it's hard to understand. But I love the content of the speech, the video, everything, awesome job.

 

[jgmaynard]

OK.. I LOVE the different voices, I think the overlap may be a bit over done (and a little too quick at first). I LOVE the kid saying "constitution" and "this is not right." The power of using the kid for a simple moral judgement is outstanding.

JM

 

[literatim]

The problem is the overlapping voices.

 

[Elwar]

I like the different voices.

 

[bumbledraven]

I love it

I really like version 4.

http://alcpac.com/rp_30sec_ver4_sm.mov

The voices work great now. I also love the use of Aravoth's graphics at the end. It's about time we started seeing "Restore the Republic" as Paul's slogan. I like it much better than "Hope for America".

 

[AdamT]

The voices work great now. I also love the use of Aravoth's graphics at the end. It's about time we started seeing "Restore the Republic" as Paul's slogan. I like it much better than "Hope for America".

Yes. The first time I saw Avaroth's "Stop Dreaming" I was forever touched with his ending graphics and message. I have spiffed them up a bit for the commercial, but it's still all his.

 

[happyphilter]

i dont like how theres a lot of voices cutting in and out. maybe just a few... and not so jumbled