New Re-cut "FOR LIBERTY" artwork, critique needed

[UtahApocalypse]

Here is my suggestion for redoing the "Recut" on the cover:

 

[AdamT]

Will look similar to this.

 

[AdamT]

Alright, we just spent about 6 hours doing a major re-write on the right panel copy tonight. Latest version, which allowed us added space to include an awesome Ron Paul quote in the upper right.

 

[Esoteric]

Maybe italicize the quote to make it stand out from the rest of the text.

 

[AdamT]

Latest. We're really happy with this.

 

[nayjevin]

Glad it's shaping up, this is great.

Maybe put up some text in the video before the movie that says 'a film by grassroots individuals unaffiliated with any official campaign?' For the previous poster who mentioned average joe might think it's from the campaign.

 

[AdamT]

Glad it's shaping up, this is great.

Maybe put up some text in the video before the movie that says 'a film by grassroots individuals unaffiliated with any official campaign?' For the previous poster who mentioned average joe might think it's from the campaign.

There is a disclaimer on the back cover.

 

[JoshLowry]

Awesome work guys and gals!

 

[nayjevin]

Been thinking about this... to me the film in its original version is directed toward everyone but mainstream Republicans, you know folks that don't identify with normal politicians. Then the cover leads with a Reagan quote - which to me might pigeonhole him in people's minds before they are willing to watch. What do you all think about that?

 

[AdamT]

We think the quote is good, mainly because it's so open-ended and general. It got sent into the printers this morning so it's a done deal.

 

[nayjevin]

We think the quote is good, mainly because it's so open-ended and general. It got sent into the printers this morning so it's a done deal.

I see, I see. If there's a chance for changing it on the next order, I'd consider going at another angle, or doing a print of two choices mebbe. Anyway, onward and upward!

 

[Nate-ForLiberty]

We think the quote is good, mainly because it's so open-ended and general. It got sent into the printers this morning so it's a done deal.

what's the eta?

 

[AdamT]

Getting 10k copies around the 4th, unfortunately probably not in time to ship so peeps get them by the 4th.

 

[Uriah]

I just watched to re-cut version of "For Liberty"... I haven't felt more inspired since 2008.

 

[dusman]

I like the idea of quotes. However, I'd do a little spin on this and more something like:

"Two Thumbs Up!"
- Andrew Jackson

"I taught him everything he knows... we need more defenders of liberty!"
- Thomas Jefferson

"Give me Ron Paul and Liberty... or give me death!"
- Patrick Henry

Obviously not true quotations, but hints at their ideas being alive and well and I think it would draw a lot of curiosity from the start.