New Dr Paul vid I made...

Sweet, elegant and to the point as it beckons Americans to remember what their idea of heroes used to be like.
 
Great but a couple of things:

Text color was hard to read at times.
You need to leave the text up a little longer on a few of the CGs to allow viewer sufficient time to read.

Love the music, transitions and choice of visuals. Keep it going.
 
I'm about to upload a variant... maybe even erase the first version.

I shortened the first shot a little and left the text timing alone, and it becomes SO MUCH easier to read.

Also, I changed the Blue, White, Red text to Red, White, Blue... Gotta love that subtle psychological tinkering, eh? ;)
 
I'm about to upload a variant... maybe even erase the first version.

I shortened the first shot a little and left the text timing alone, and it becomes SO MUCH easier to read.

Also, I changed the Blue, White, Red text to Red, White, Blue... Gotta love that subtle psychological tinkering, eh? ;)

OMG you brain washed me! I support Ron Paul now!
 
Nice video. I hope you plan on submitting it to the msnbc contest. It's much better than the "v for vendetta" one.
 
text went too fast and I couldnt read the blue cause it blended in with the suit
 
text went too fast and I couldnt read the blue cause it blended in with the suit

I know. I've fixed it, but I can't upload it right now (I'm at work and it's at home and I can't use youTube here).
It's a lot of text for 30 seconds too... :(
 
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Actually making a good 30 second clip is more usable for a real campaign ad. Its really too bad we dont have the funds because spot runner is giving away a free week of advertising if you buy 8 weeks.
 
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