Need Critique - Ron Paul Flyer

[Koz]

OK, here's the text for the flyer I have been working on. Trying to keep it simple enough that people will read it on a bulletin board. Any thoughts? This is without formatting obvioulsy.


Are You Better Off Today
Than You Were Ten Years Ago?

Are you sick of Republicans and Democrats who both vote to make government bigger and give big companies and banksters bailouts with your money?

Are you tired of crooked politicians who lie out of both sides of their mouths while not being responsible with your tax dollars?


What do you know about Ron Paul?


• He favors a small constitutional government.

• He has been married to the same woman for more than 40 years.

• In 8 terms in congress he has never voted to raise your taxes, ever!

• Ron Paul gets an A+ from the Gun Owners of America (GOA)

• Ron Paul opposes all subsidies to foreign countries.

• He favors a strong defense without the endless wars.

• He returns a portion of his budget every year to the treasury.

• He opts out of both the Congressional Pension and Healthcare systems.

• Ron Paul is running for president in 2012.



The next Ron Paul - Campaign for Liberty Meetup will be on June 27 at 6:30 p.m. at the Barnesburg Tavern & Grille. We'll be in the back room.

 

[Koz]

Anyone?

 

[CGoodin]

The phrase, "Had enough?" would be an improvement over "Are you better off ..." because fewer words means you can use a larger, more eye-catching font - and because it fits better with the other rhetorical questions you ask later in the flier. Also, I'd add something about opposition to the bailouts and 'Obamacare,' since these are contentious issues likely to attract people already geared to support a pro-liberty candidate.