rideurlightning
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Hey all, just finished writing my Common Ap essay to apply to colleges! I know it's not perfect and is a bit rushed (I was limited to 500 words), but I hope you guys like it:
For the past two years, there has not been one person more influential to my values than Dr. Ron Paul. In both his medical practice and thirty years as a statesman, Dr. Paul has exhibited integrity on a level that I never knew existed in our time. In an era that is dominated by people who are so quick to abandon their principles for personal gain, Dr. Paul is a beacon of hope to me and countless others who are appalled by the lack of honesty in both politics and the workplace. He has changed my perspective on life and how I view the world forever.
As a doctor, Ron Paul set personal standards for himself that are both extremely admirable and perfectly in line with his beliefs. As a huge free market advocate, Dr. Paul not only refused to accept Medicare and Medicaid from his patients, but he would treat individuals on these programs to absolutely no cost. Dr. Paul was even bold enough to treat those struggling financially under private insurance programs to little or no cost at all. Furthermore, he treated each of his patients as equals, no matter what their ethnicity or financial status. I find this approach inspiring, not only because the man practices what he preaches, but because he is willing to risk his own financial status for the wellbeing of others.
Now whether one agrees with him on politics or not, it is hard to argue that Ron Paul is not a man of pristine character and consistency. In his 30 years as a congressman, Dr. Paul has kept one of the most consistent voting records in American history. He has also stood firm in his pledge to protect the original intent of the US. Constitution and the vision of America’s founders by refusing to vote on bills that are deemed unconstitutional, an attack on civil liberties, or a threat to the ideals of small government. Ron Paul has never accepted lobbyist money; in fact, lobbyists do not even bother stopping by his office. He does not participate in the congressional pension program and has advocated for lower congressional pay. Lastly, Ron Paul has never voted to increase taxes or the federal debt ceiling. This to me is incredible, as it proves that he is a man of strict values that cannot be bought by special interests. It also proves that Dr. Paul is not a panderer and is unafraid to speak the truth about every issue, even if that means losing votes, being heckled at debates, or putting his own life in danger.
Dr. Ron Paul has really made me reevaluate myself several times on my principles. His generosity as a doctor has been an inspiration to me, and I continually attempt to emulate these selfless actions every day. As a statesman, he has opened my eyes to a new world view, and has motivated me to speak the truth and stand firm on my beliefs. Ron Paul has cured my apathy.
For the past two years, there has not been one person more influential to my values than Dr. Ron Paul. In both his medical practice and thirty years as a statesman, Dr. Paul has exhibited integrity on a level that I never knew existed in our time. In an era that is dominated by people who are so quick to abandon their principles for personal gain, Dr. Paul is a beacon of hope to me and countless others who are appalled by the lack of honesty in both politics and the workplace. He has changed my perspective on life and how I view the world forever.
As a doctor, Ron Paul set personal standards for himself that are both extremely admirable and perfectly in line with his beliefs. As a huge free market advocate, Dr. Paul not only refused to accept Medicare and Medicaid from his patients, but he would treat individuals on these programs to absolutely no cost. Dr. Paul was even bold enough to treat those struggling financially under private insurance programs to little or no cost at all. Furthermore, he treated each of his patients as equals, no matter what their ethnicity or financial status. I find this approach inspiring, not only because the man practices what he preaches, but because he is willing to risk his own financial status for the wellbeing of others.
Now whether one agrees with him on politics or not, it is hard to argue that Ron Paul is not a man of pristine character and consistency. In his 30 years as a congressman, Dr. Paul has kept one of the most consistent voting records in American history. He has also stood firm in his pledge to protect the original intent of the US. Constitution and the vision of America’s founders by refusing to vote on bills that are deemed unconstitutional, an attack on civil liberties, or a threat to the ideals of small government. Ron Paul has never accepted lobbyist money; in fact, lobbyists do not even bother stopping by his office. He does not participate in the congressional pension program and has advocated for lower congressional pay. Lastly, Ron Paul has never voted to increase taxes or the federal debt ceiling. This to me is incredible, as it proves that he is a man of strict values that cannot be bought by special interests. It also proves that Dr. Paul is not a panderer and is unafraid to speak the truth about every issue, even if that means losing votes, being heckled at debates, or putting his own life in danger.
Dr. Ron Paul has really made me reevaluate myself several times on my principles. His generosity as a doctor has been an inspiration to me, and I continually attempt to emulate these selfless actions every day. As a statesman, he has opened my eyes to a new world view, and has motivated me to speak the truth and stand firm on my beliefs. Ron Paul has cured my apathy.
