Final draft of third Bay Area newspaper ad

[linusPAULing]

Sorry... too late for changes. Hopefully it's ok

This is third of a series:

 

[DeafEric]

Looks good someone please check spelling and grammar.

 

[Zak]

I would include something about respecting states' rights and ending the DEA raids on cancer patients / medical marijuana clubs when advertising in CA

 

[dannno]

I would include something about respecting states' rights and ending the DEA raids on cancer patients / medical marijuana clubs when advertising in CA

Respects the Doctor/Patient relationship and believes in health freedom and alternative medicine.

Will end DEA raids on state-sanctioned medicinal cannabis dispensaries.

 

[linusPAULing]

Thanks for the input everyone. We have a fourth ad to come, so perhaps we can get into some of this content.

 

[MayTheRonBeWithYou]

You guys really do a great job on these.

 

[Heather in WI]

Is there anyway to get pdf copies of your ads? We would love to use one in Milwaukee.

 

[WRellim]

Too detailed... you are trying to sell on "features" and narrowly defined "issues" -- you need to sell BENEFITS and work on people at the emotional level, whether we like it or not, THAT is how people decide who to vote for.

 

[Heather in WI]

bumping

 

[Inflation]

Too many words.

 

[Rhys]

those are gorgeous. if i modded anything it would be to inside round the blue corners

i just noticed the borders around his pics are off a little