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Will they fix the typo?
I apologize if it has been brought up before, but are they going to fix the typo in the middle of the ad? The part that starts "...warned of the dangers of political parties..." It starts two lines the same but only completes one of them.
Sorry if it has been addressed earlier on.
Otherwise, a fantastic ad.
I apologize if it has been brought up before, but are they going to fix the typo in the middle of the ad? The part that starts "...warned of the dangers of political parties..." It starts two lines the same but only completes one of them.
Sorry if it has been addressed earlier on.
Otherwise, a fantastic ad.
Msm
Looks good except the Mainstream Media rant. All this stuff about a mainstream media conspiracy makes us Paul supporters look like crazy. I'm a Paul supporter and I don't see any more false or vicious reports about Paul than I see in the non-mainstream media. That statement should be removed or changed. It could be something positive like, "Thanks to our free press, the public will learn the truth about Ron Paul and his positions regardless of the lies and misrepresentations presented by some individuals in the media." And the claim that media is "centralized" is bogus. The media has never been more decentralized than it is today. The media market is pretty damned free in the U.S., so if it's "centralized" whose fault would that be? Change or remove the MSM statement, please. Thanks.
Looks good except the Mainstream Media rant. All this stuff about a mainstream media conspiracy makes us Paul supporters look like crazy. I'm a Paul supporter and I don't see any more false or vicious reports about Paul than I see in the non-mainstream media. That statement should be removed or changed. It could be something positive like, "Thanks to our free press, the public will learn the truth about Ron Paul and his positions regardless of the lies and misrepresentations presented by some individuals in the media." And the claim that media is "centralized" is bogus. The media has never been more decentralized than it is today. The media market is pretty damned free in the U.S., so if it's "centralized" whose fault would that be? Change or remove the MSM statement, please. Thanks.
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I just noticed that too. Has the typo issue been addressed?
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Looking good!
Some copy editor comments (if they haven't already been pointed out):
"National Debt", "Central Bank", and "National Security" do not need to be capitalized.
"habeas corpus" could be italicized.
"one-day" and "fund-raiser" do not need hyphens.
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Some copy editor comments (if they haven't already been pointed out):
"National Debt", "Central Bank", and "National Security" do not need to be capitalized.
"habeas corpus" could be italicized.
"one-day" and "fund-raiser" do not need hyphens.
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Yes, you are correct... yet the gentleman who inspired this and posted the Dollars, as well as the camera ready art that the others put together, rendered a perfect orchestration of truth and beauty that is as to the point as can be expected given the complexity of the issues we face today.
The only thing that could have been added to make it more perfect would have been to add the portraits of the man from Braintree and his brewer cousin to perfectly round out the images of the founders... other than that it is perfection!
--Oldyoti
"When one gets in bed with government, one must expect the diseases it spreads." ~Ron Paul
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my 99 cents
Hey I just wanted to say awesome idea!
One thing I am not too sure about is the "urged congress to hunt down terrorist of 9/11"
Many people pretty much know there were no terrorist.
the voted against Iraq war is good though. Just my thought coming from the San Francisco Bay Area based upon all the people I know and talk to on the streets.
And the Will restore habeas corpus deal, maybe before that "voted against the Military Commissions ACT" which I'm sure he did. I worked for the ACLU fundraising to end that, what a failure they were. But the whole time canvassing on the streets I was passing out business cards with Ron Paul and my site, many conversions out of that!
I guess another thing is.... that was a lot to read. I wouldn't of read it if I was in the paper. Maybe super size and make the bottom left facts stand out. His key eye grabbers. Maybe shrink and deprioritizes all the "warned us about" stuff.
Also.... the top pictures about founding fathers.... people don't care. People don't get sucked in by it....
Well I guess it could use a lot of improvement now that I think critically. (I like Photoshop, advertising marketing and such).
But I mean awesome amazing idea and I think needs a major rework.
Also the ronpaulstop dreaming is a great video but check out and consider my site.
Of course I have that and all the best videos in one spot and it is guaranteed to convert users over to Ron Paul within 3 videos.
www.RonPaulStreetTeam.com
it would be very beneficial to get all those videos in that order to the people which is why I have put alot of work into the site.
Please consider and get back to me.
Sites like Daily Paul and Library are really for hardcore Ron Paul fans. We need noobs to have their short attention span sucked in. They shouldn't sift through tons of financial articles and books on foreign policy. They simply wont.
They vote Obama and Hillary because they don't think that deep.
I am sure my video line up is a much better tool then every up to the minute article filled with mumbo jumbo they want nothing to do with. Give em the short sweet strong freedom message and watch em come over.
I promise!
www.RonPaulStreetTeam.com
Hey I just wanted to say awesome idea!
One thing I am not too sure about is the "urged congress to hunt down terrorist of 9/11"
Many people pretty much know there were no terrorist.
the voted against Iraq war is good though. Just my thought coming from the San Francisco Bay Area based upon all the people I know and talk to on the streets.
And the Will restore habeas corpus deal, maybe before that "voted against the Military Commissions ACT" which I'm sure he did. I worked for the ACLU fundraising to end that, what a failure they were. But the whole time canvassing on the streets I was passing out business cards with Ron Paul and my site, many conversions out of that!
I guess another thing is.... that was a lot to read. I wouldn't of read it if I was in the paper. Maybe super size and make the bottom left facts stand out. His key eye grabbers. Maybe shrink and deprioritizes all the "warned us about" stuff.
Also.... the top pictures about founding fathers.... people don't care. People don't get sucked in by it....
Well I guess it could use a lot of improvement now that I think critically. (I like Photoshop, advertising marketing and such).
But I mean awesome amazing idea and I think needs a major rework.
Also the ronpaulstop dreaming is a great video but check out and consider my site.
Of course I have that and all the best videos in one spot and it is guaranteed to convert users over to Ron Paul within 3 videos.
www.RonPaulStreetTeam.com
it would be very beneficial to get all those videos in that order to the people which is why I have put alot of work into the site.
Please consider and get back to me.
Sites like Daily Paul and Library are really for hardcore Ron Paul fans. We need noobs to have their short attention span sucked in. They shouldn't sift through tons of financial articles and books on foreign policy. They simply wont.
They vote Obama and Hillary because they don't think that deep.
I am sure my video line up is a much better tool then every up to the minute article filled with mumbo jumbo they want nothing to do with. Give em the short sweet strong freedom message and watch em come over.
I promise!
www.RonPaulStreetTeam.com
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It is not a typo it is a register... the image is made of two separate jpegs which will be set the one over the other at the lower line when set for printing...
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