It would be better as a full television series. A complete adaptation. Possibly with airlines instead of trains.
It would take a lot of creative license to make it watchable for people who are not already fans. It would take serious writing to keep the themes and ideas in there and let them develop.
Take Rands name off it. It needs the sort of pacing of Breaking Bad, or Mad Men. It can be done, but we live in a world where shows like firefly get cancelled and Jericho gets cancelled twice.
It needs to feel like a regular show that just gets more and more dystopian. It needs to tie into day to day events more.
Think of Newsroom. Create a show that cuts to behind the scenes action of Acta and Sopa and the NDAA in the Whitehouse. Put words in the mouths of TPTB.
It would take a lot of creative license to make it watchable for people who are not already fans. It would take serious writing to keep the themes and ideas in there and let them develop.
Take Rands name off it. It needs the sort of pacing of Breaking Bad, or Mad Men. It can be done, but we live in a world where shows like firefly get cancelled and Jericho gets cancelled twice.
It needs to feel like a regular show that just gets more and more dystopian. It needs to tie into day to day events more.
Think of Newsroom. Create a show that cuts to behind the scenes action of Acta and Sopa and the NDAA in the Whitehouse. Put words in the mouths of TPTB.