Hey Erin (that's the name it says on the pamphlet!)
I like this idea and I think you are off to a good start. I often wish the slim jims were a bit more extensive myself. Here's a few changes I would make:
"He is also a member of the congressional Green Scissors Coalition, which works to cut the red tape that prevents alternative energy sources from being explored." (Second sentence was a fragment.)
"He voted FOR bringing Bin Laden and Al-Qaeda to justice."
"You may not agree with Ron Paul on everything but Ron Paul has consistently proven throughout his 10 terms in Congress that he can be trusted to "support... defend" and "bear true faith and allegiance" to the Constitution, as his oath of office demands.
"Ron Paul does not want to be president so that he can run your life. He understands that the constitution gives American citizens considerable power to legislate themselves at the local and state levels, and that this right is often overshadowed by Washington's strong arm. This is an anti-American trend which he strongly opposes. It's time to take back control over our own communities and lives!"
The war in Iraq was sold to us under false pretenses. It is costing us hundreds of billions a year and thousands of lives.
Our National Guard and border agents are being sent overseas to defend foreign borders while our own borders are left vulnerable, diminishing our safety.
Our freedom movement is growing every day!
He will work to create a medical savings accounts for every American who wants one and allow all medical costs to be tax deductible
It includes ending birthright citizenship, securing America’s borders, regulating student visas from terrorist nations, refocusing our efforts back on the terrorists who attacked us on 9/11, revamp our intelligence agencies, allow the president to issue letter of marque, allow pilots to carry firearms and much more.
The government decided long ago that business could pollute your air and water and you are helpless to prevent it. If companies were required to respect personal property rights it would get very expensive to pollute. (reversed order of sentences)
Ron Paul gets more donations from active duty military than all the candidates combined. In the words of Ronald Reagan: "Ron Paul is one of the outstanding leaders fighting for a stronger national defense. As a former Air Force officer, he knows well the needs of our armed forces, and he always puts them first. We need to keep him fighting for our country."
About the last one: The quote looked too crowded-in where it was. It needed a blank line above and below it like the quotes to the right. But, since there isn't room to do that without shorting your other write-ups, I think this is the best solution.
