Lord Xar
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I am in the midst of creating a TV Commercial. I need some feedback on the following.
The beginning of the clips has the following.. (its a liberty ad btw)
Opening scene opens with the Constitution Burning, and the American Seal (see freedom to fascism scene....)
Over that something like this for a voice-over:
"Our constitution is being assailed from all sides by the very politicians sworn to uphold it...." and then a text overlay.. like "Save our Constitution" etc..
Anyways.
DO you think this is Sacriledge or a powerful message?
this is used to denote it is being attacked... and it must be restored:
Please keep in mind that the alternative would to add "patriotic themes in the opening scenes... washington, signers of delcaration etc.." etc.. with talking about the constution being assailed...
the idea is..
1. you tie a negative voice over with a negative image
2. you tie a negative voice over with the 'how we need to remember.." positive image.
My idea is that we see starving african babies on tv, bodies of dead children or soldiers to oppose the war... etc.. so emotion is powerful... BUT, the idea of a burning constitution could turn people off as sacriledge....
SO that is the poll.
The beginning of the clips has the following.. (its a liberty ad btw)
Opening scene opens with the Constitution Burning, and the American Seal (see freedom to fascism scene....)
Over that something like this for a voice-over:
"Our constitution is being assailed from all sides by the very politicians sworn to uphold it...." and then a text overlay.. like "Save our Constitution" etc..
Anyways.
DO you think this is Sacriledge or a powerful message?
this is used to denote it is being attacked... and it must be restored:

Please keep in mind that the alternative would to add "patriotic themes in the opening scenes... washington, signers of delcaration etc.." etc.. with talking about the constution being assailed...
the idea is..
1. you tie a negative voice over with a negative image
2. you tie a negative voice over with the 'how we need to remember.." positive image.
My idea is that we see starving african babies on tv, bodies of dead children or soldiers to oppose the war... etc.. so emotion is powerful... BUT, the idea of a burning constitution could turn people off as sacriledge....
SO that is the poll.
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